Woah! This was utter brilliance! I don't even know what to say. Seriously though, your writing was just amazing. What was really happening and what Dean thought was happening was so easy to distinct from, and it was written in Dean's POV! ROFL! I don't even know how to explain it. Amazing fc hon!
Sorry, I had to delete my earlier comment because it needed editing and LJ wouldn't let me edit on your page.XD
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Date: 2011-02-04 09:21 am (UTC)Sorry, I had to delete my earlier comment because it needed editing and LJ wouldn't let me edit on your page.XD